Showing posts with label MaryAnn Diorio. Show all posts
Showing posts with label MaryAnn Diorio. Show all posts

Saturday, February 18, 2023

The Life-Changing Power of Love-Imbued Writing


by MaryAnn Diorio, PhD, MFA @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Of all weapons against hardship, the most powerful is love. And love can also be our greatest weapon in the many hardships we face as writers. 

How?

We writers who are Christ-followers fully understand the unique challenges we face as we seek to create works of art that please our Lord and bless our readers. We often struggle to overcome these challenges by sheer determination, stressful schedules, or physically unhealthful habits.

Saturday, January 21, 2023

S.M.A.R.T. Goals for Writers in 2023


by MaryAnn Diorio, PhD, MFA @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Have you noticed how many things are labeled “smart” these days? We have SMART phones, SMART watches, and even SMART washing machines! 

The word smart has become a household word in our culture. An Internet search for its definition resulted in this:

Saturday, December 17, 2022

How Setting and Characterization Intersect in the Books We Write


by MaryAnn Diorio, PhD, MFA @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Just as a brilliant diamond needs the perfect setting, so does a story need its perfect setting. 

So, what is setting? The setting of a story—also known as backdrop, or, in theatrical terms, the set—is simply where and when the plot of the story takes place. Authors often create settings from their own imaginations, but just as often, they use real settings and embellish them with original characteristics. For example, an author may choose a real New England town in which to place her story, yet she will add a restaurant that does not actually exist there.

Saturday, November 19, 2022

The Three O's of a Great Scene: Objective, Opposition, Outcome


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Scenes are the lifeblood of a story. The stronger your scenes, the stronger your story.

So, how does one craft a good scene?

Scenes—like everything else in God's universe—reflect His triune nature. In other words, they work in threes. Why? Because God ordained the entire universe to work in threes. 

Consider the academic disciplines. Art has three primary colors: red, yellow, and blue. Music has three primary elements: melody, harmony, and rhythm. Chemistry has three basic elements: solids, liquids, and gases. History has three periods of time: past, present, and future. Geometry has three dimensional aspects: length, width, and height. And Story has three acts: a beginning, a middle, and an end.

Saturday, October 15, 2022

Learn to Use the Three Layers of Dialogue Text Context and Subtext Effectively


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Much has been written on how to write dialogue but, to my knowledge, less has been written on the components of dialogue. This post will explore these components and the reasons it is important to understand them. 

So, first, the three components of dialogue are Text, Context, and Subtext. These three components function much like the three parts of a syllogism: Major Premise, Minor Premise, and Conclusion. 

With that parallel in mind, let's take a closer look at Text, Context, and Subtext.

TEXT
Text is the major premise. Just as the syllogistic major premise is the foundation of the logical argument, Text is the foundation of the fictional argument. Text is that component of story that tells the reader what happened. It is the bare facts. It is everything on the page that is not implied but stated straightforwardly. Text does not need interpretation. It marks the obvious, what is clearly understood from any angle. Like the major premise in a syllogism, Text is fact, albeit story fact, in its most elemental form.

Of the three components, Text is the easiest to understand. It is also the all-encompassing foundation of a story in the sense that both Context and Subtext are contained within Text and rest upon it, just as the minor premise and the conclusion are contained within the major premise and rest upon it. Without the major premise, we could have no minor premise or conclusion. Likewise, without Text, we could have no Context or Subtext.

CONTEXT
As its meaning implies, Context is what goes with Text. The word context derives from two Latin words: cum (meaning with) and texere (meaning to weave). So, Context is a weaving with Text. 

Context includes all the information a reader needs to understand the story. Context includes who the characters are, whatthey are doing, where they are doing it, when they are doing it, and so forth. Context is the supporting actor to Text. 

Context is essential to the reader's engagement with a story. Just as the minor premise informs the major premise with deeper understanding, so does Context inform Text with deeper understanding. In a syllogism, when there is no minor premise to give deeper understanding to the major premise, the logician will feel disoriented and disengaged from the argument. Likewise, without Context to give deeper understanding to the story, the reader will feel disoriented and disengaged from the story. 

SUBTEXT
Whereas Context is the information surrounding a story and grounding the reader, Subtext is what the reader reads between the lines. It is what a character does NOT say but what a character implies. Subtext is beneath the surface (The Latin word sub means under). In Subtext, what is on the surface does not match what is beneath the surface. What is going on with the character on the outside is at odds with what is going on with the character on the inside.

Subtext adds depth and dimension to a story, making it solid and well-rounded. But, it is the job of the reader to pick up subtext. When Subtext is written well, the reader will usually have no problem recognizing it.

Example:
Mom reprimanded five-year-old Mandy for getting into her lipstick. "You're too young to wear lipstick." Mom's lips could not suppress a smile.

In this story snippet, we know that Mom's reprimand (external) contradicts her amusement (internal). That contradiction is made clear by the juxtaposition of the dialogue (Text) with the description of Mom's reaction (Subtext). 

We adults employ Subtext daily in real life, and so should our characters. For example, unlike children who are blunt in their communication (A precious child once told me I was "ancient." :)), we adults would say something like, "You're seasoned and mature."

Subtext enriches a story and enables the reader to participate more fully in it. Use it well with Text and Context and you will create a compelling story that will keep your readers turning pages and your characters lingering long in their minds and hearts.

TWEETABLE

MaryAnn Diorio writes women’s fiction from a small, quaint, Victorian town in southern New Jersey where neighbors still stop to chat while walking their dogs, houses still sport wide, wrap-around porches, and the charming downtown still finds kids licking lollipops and old married folks holding hands. A true Jersey girl, MaryAnn is a big fan of Jersey diners, Jersey tomatoes, and the Jersey shore.

Featured Image: Photo by Sergey Zolkin on Unsplash

Friday, September 9, 2022

How to Keep Your Heart in Your Writing


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Heart. How would you describe it? Emotion? Feeling? That special something that touches the deepest part of you?

One Internet dictionary defines heart as "the central or innermost part of something." The heart is the core that gives something life, around which everything else grows, and from which everything else flows. Without the heart, there would be no life.

When it comes to writing, heart is what gives your writing life. Heart is that special something in your words that stirs your readers, moves them to tears—or to action. Heart is what makes your readers keep turning pages and keep buying your books.

Friday, August 12, 2022

How Writers Can Effectively Fight the Issue of Story Stall


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

If you've been writing fiction for any length of time, you have very likely experienced what I call "Story Stall." What is story stall? Besides being a tongue-twister :), story stall is a stop in the forward motion of your story while you are writing it. It is the point in your story where you get stuck and cannot move forward. Some people call this writer's block. In my opinion, story stall—like writer's block—is, at its root, nothing more than the symptom of a story problem. 

Friday, July 29, 2022

The Things We Think Have a Powerful Impact on Our Writing Lives


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Scripture teaches us in Proverbs 23:7 NKJV that "as a man thinks in his heart, so is he." Let's unpack this verse to glean some of its rich treasure and apply it to our writing life.

While in context, the verse refers to having dinner with a hypocritical ruler who is saying one thing but thinking another, it can also be interpreted to mean that the way we think is the way we will be. Consider this closely related verse: "Guard your heart above all else, for it determines the course of your life" (Proverbs 4:23 NLT). 

Wednesday, June 8, 2022

Why NOT to Give Away Your Presentation Slides


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

"May we have your slides?" This is a common question that I often hear after I give a presentation. Although I used to give away my slides, I no longer do so. While at first my decision may seem socially unacceptable, there is good reason and good precedent for not giving away one's slides. In the long run, not giving away one's slides will benefit those who attended the presentation.

So, why do I not give away my slides?

Tuesday, April 19, 2022

How to Connect with Your Readers using the Power of Emotion!


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Emotion! Emotion! Emotion!

Most of us are familiar with the expression "Location! Location! Location!" when it comes to the value of real estate. Regardless of other important features in determining the worth of a home, location is the key factor.

When it comes to writing fiction, the key factor is "Emotion! Emotion! Emotion!" It is emotion—not plot or characterization or dialogue—that ultimately determines the worth of a story to a reader. This is not to say that plot, characterization, and dialogue are not important. But, ultimately, emotion is what carries the story—and the reader. 

Monday, March 14, 2022

Seven Keys to Writing Success


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

Over the many years of my writing career, I've observed seven keys that will, if applied, help you achieve writing success.

Tuesday, January 25, 2022

Why Should Writers Learn to Analyze Fiction?


by MaryAnn Diorio @DrMaryAnnDiorio

As someone who spent years analyzing the work of numerous classic authors while earning my PhD and MFA, and as a former university professor who has taught fiction writing and literature, I’d like to share with you some insights regarding the reasons I think writers should learn how critically and objectively to analyze the work of other writers.