Showing posts with label 10 Ways to Know You Have Too Many Characters in Your Manuscript. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 10 Ways to Know You Have Too Many Characters in Your Manuscript. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 24, 2024

10 Ways to Know You Have Too Many Characters in Your Manuscript


by DiAnn Mills @DiAnnMills

Writers enjoy creating a cast of characters. The process of developing distinct story players with unusual physical, mental, emotional, and spiritual traits fills us with satisfaction. But how do we know when we have too many?

The dilemma of too many characters often occurs on the first page when more than two story players struggle for the point of view. We want the reader to identify with one character and establish a sympathetic bond. The writer invites the reader to invest hours and energy to walk the same journey as a story player. Using more than two characters in the beginning often confuses the reader, and confusion leads to putting the story aside.