From Edie: Lilka Raphael shares how to write more concisely by cutting unnecessary words, strengthening scenes, building tension, and keeping readers engaged from beginning to end.
How to Write More Concisely: Why Fewer Words Make Your Writing Stronger
by Lilka Raphael @Lilka_Raphael
As to the adjective, when in doubt, strike it out. ~Mark Twain
As authors, our mission is to convey a message or make a point that is clearly understood. In theory, the more words that we write should provide additional insight to the reader. However, in an era of shorter attention spans and micro messages, we are often most effective when we are prudent with our words. To catch and maintain our readers’ attention, more isn’t always better. The knack of maximizing influence through deliberate and concise word choices is a skill suited for writers of any genre.
One of the best examples of editing can be found in the fifty-year-old movie, Jaws. It set the standard for summer blockbusters and was based on the novel by Peter Benchly. Steven Spielberg took liberties with the original storyline, yet he readily admitted that the movie would not have been a success without extreme edits. It was what the viewers didn’t see that fueled the horror and created suspense.
Likewise, authors build convincing characters and scenes by using adverbs and adjectives sparingly. This forces the writer to utilize specific terms and tenses that don’t require explanation. Similarly, action typically resonates better with readers compared to extensive narrative depending on the scene. Instead of describing a “hot pan,” a reference to steam rising from it may be better suited.
In the same manner, authors can create drama by minimizing explanation and allowing the reader’s imagination to work. It is often what is left unsaid that generates tension between characters. Or consider a scene where the remnants of a murder are discovered contrasted to a blow-by-blow detail of the attack. Choosing to omit the depiction of a crime can draw readers further into the plot as they speculate on the how and why.
Another way to write captivating scenes is by embracing short sentences and phrases. Brevity creates tension by implying moods such as frustration or anger. Instead of extensive dialogue, curt replies may engage readers and move the storyline along.
Lastly, use the appropriate word count. Catching the reader’s attention is one thing but keeping it another. Make sure your word count is conducive to what you write. If you write to entertain, there is an expectation regarding the length of chapters for traditional publishing. If you write to educate, concise points per chapter are easier to understand compared to a dozen points in as many pages. As a devotional writer, I’m cognizant that few readers want to digest a thousand words over coffee.
As we expand our writing talents, finding the balance between too little and too much can be daunting. Still, learning to decrease the word count and captivate the reader is an art and a skill.
Sometimes less really is more.
He who has knowledge spares his words, And a man of understanding is of a calm spirit. Proverbs 17:27 NKJV
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Lilka’s greatest achievements are her two adult sons who have flown the nest. Happily married for thirty-two years, she lives east of Atlanta with her husband, Rod. They now share their home with two German Shepherds—Holly and Ivy—and one naughty kitty, Moxie.
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