by Todd Allen @ToddAllenAuthor
The next time you create a
new character, focus on their attitude instead of their backstory. You might be
surprised where it leads you.
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Creating memorable
characters is one of the biggest challenges facing writers. Readers often
forget the specifics of plots, but they always remember well-drawn characters.
Jack Reacher, Hannibal Lecter, and Tom Sawyer will live forever in our memories
because they share one common element: an unmistakable attitude.
I used to spend hours
filling out profile worksheets for each character I used in a story. Often I
became frustrated when the details I created seemed unrelated to the story I
wanted to tell. While these profiles might help some writers, I never used them
while writing. Eventually I scrapped the entire process and created a freeform
letter written in the character’s voice. The result read like a transcript of a
reality show confessional. The character spoke directly to the audience,
telling only what the character wanted to share.
Within those lines I
discovered my character’s attitude. I learned how she saw the world—and more
importantly, herself. This information proved more useful to me than knowing
where she went to school or how she ordered her eggs.
In his excellent book on
writing, Story Trumps
Structure, author Steven James writes, “A character with an attitude is
always more interesting than a character with a history.”
Steven’s advice
resonated so deeply it changed the way I introduced characters. Instead of
inserting a brief paragraph of backstory (which I’d always thought was essential to understanding the character), I let
the character leap into each scene brimming with attitude. I figured I could
include the backstory later, after the reader understood her viewpoint.
I tried this in a
manuscript titled The Keeper with a newspaper reporter convinced
she possessed a unique connection with the universe. On page 273 I included a
paragraph of backstory explaining how she came to this conclusion. My agent
highlighted the section and recommended I cut it. Upon reflection, I agreed. By
that point readers knew her so well they didn’t need the explanation. It didn’t
matter what specific event had helped form her attitude. What mattered was that
her attitude drove her actions through the story.
In another manuscript
titled The Night Janitor,
I created another major character without one word of backstory. Clyde Merritt,
a YouTube-based journalist whose videos suddenly go viral, projected an
attitude that surprised me. One of his chapters begins this way:
“Clyde’s basement
apartment seemed too small for him now, his desk too short, the carpet too
dirty and cheap for a man of impending wealth and celebrity. He glanced at his
e-mail inbox. The number of new messages had grown impossibly large. Only
someone with more patience than him could open and read each one. He scribbled
the word ASSISTANT on a notepad in pencil. Next to it he added: ATTRACTIVE,
YOUNG, SMART. He tapped the pencil against his front teeth, then returned to
the notepad and struck through the last word.”
Will readers care how
Clyde developed his attitude of comic self-importance? I’m betting not.
Hopefully they’ll be more interested in the mess his attitude draws him into.
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Todd Allen writes
short stories and thrillers infused with an element of the supernatural. His
work has been published in literary and suspense magazines including Chiron Review, Thought Magazine, and Futures Mystery Anthology Magazine. He
also offers free samples of his stories and manuscripts on his website, toddallenauthor.com. He lives near
Houston, Texas with his wife and three sons.
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Todd, Great advice. I'm embarking on my first novel. I've agonized over my characters. Thank you for your insight.
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting, Cherrilynn. Best of luck to you in your writing!
ReplyDeleteI love it when a character just jumps off the page and takes control of the world around him, just because that is who he is. I strive to write in that way, but it takes practice and determination to set aside any backstory and just let the words of the day flow.
ReplyDeleteGreat point! In every scene, each character has an attitude and an intention (or goal). The trick (and the fun) is to find how to best reveal and highlight those attitudes and intentions.
DeleteLove this advice! I struggle with characterization. My brain is bursting with ideas. Thank you, Todd.
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