Hi Everyone, Lynette
here to say Happy Wednesday once again. And it’s March, too. HOW did that
happen? Is time passing as fast for you as it is for me? Goodness, Christmas
will be here before we know it. LOL.
Well, I have a real
treat for you today. Since I’ve been working like crazy, I asked a friend if
she’d like to step in and offer some excellent writing advice. Advice that I’ve
taken note of and plan to incorporate into my own writing. Read on, friends, I
think you’ll like what Kristen has to say. So let me introduce her.
Kristin
Billerbeck is a CBA bestselling novelist of over 40 books, Her work has been
featured in The New York Times, World Magazine, the Atlanta
Journal-Constitution and on "The Today Show." Her love of romance
and wit began with an awkward childhood crush on Mr. Darcy, which continues to
this day. She makes her home in Silicon Valley.
Writing Motive
by Kristin Billerbeck @KristinBeck
I’ve
heard it said that Tolstoy wanted to write a novel about a bad wife and ended
up falling in love with her. That novel became Anna Karenina.
Originally, the doomed heroine was meant to be a villain to the author and make
us crave a moral society. Readers were meant to see her poor husband as a
victim to her extramarital affair and innocent in the unraveling of their
lives. But a strange thing happened as Tolstoy wrote Anna…she burst into
life and became real to him. Then, it wasn’t quite so simple as making husband
Karenin all good. No more than it was simple to make Anna all bad. After all, she needed a reason for her sins. Once Tolstoy found them, his
novel and his characters became unforgettable.
There’s
a huge lesson here for authors. When readers understand why characters act in a
certain way, they identify with them, even if they’d never take the same steps
— and find these actions repulsive. Tolstoy shows us Anna’s empty life.
Her loneliness, her unspeakable desire for the mysterious and magnetic
Vronsky. We watch her fall under Vronsky’s spell until we see she is
powerless to fight the passion in favor of rational thought.
Once
readers understand why her background would lead a seemingly good woman; a
proper and elegant wife into an immoral relationship though it threatens
her very existence, we understand. We empathize and must follow her to find out
what happens.
Dostoevsky
offers us this same type of motive, by taking readers into the mind of murderer
Raskolnikov in “Crime and Punishment.” He has been poor his whole life. The old, wealthy pawnbroker doesn’t have long to live. Of what value is
her life when that money could do so much for Raskolnikov? He reasons
that he can make up for the sin of her murder with good deeds later. He
can’t, of course, and we understand this as readers, but we also find ourselves
empathizing with his poverty and how it stands in the way of his dreams.
When
we understand why someone makes awful, life altering decisions, we have a a
book we cannot put down. In essence, we care. Motive takes
characters from stick figures and deepens them into fully-formed human
beings. Think about the people you know. No one is fully bad or
fully good They have flaws, quirks and drives that while we may not
understand, we can appreciate.
If
you’re having trouble finding the motive in one of your characters, ask why
they would act the way they did. Anna Karenina fell under the spell of a
magical, mysterious stranger and didn’t want to let such passionate feelings
go. Neither Anna nor Raskolnikov are correct in their thinking, but as readers,
we know why they did it and so we keep reading.
Luckily,
we are not Tolstoy or Dostoevsky. Most likely, we don’t have to make a
reader understand the mind of an adulteress or a murderer. Maybe we only
need to explain why someone loves her fiancĂ©’s brother instead of her
fiancé. Or we need to explain why an 8-year old boy, dressed in his
Sunday best, must jump into a swampy lake. The answer is in motive and
it’s one of the biggest gifts you can give your readers. Don’t make them
ask why the boy jumped. Make them see he had no other choice but to jump.
If
you’re having trouble thinking of why someone would act a certain way, think
about someone you love. Everyone has something that defines their
personality for the most part. Maybe your child is so organized that their
homework is always done without asking. That child’s room is
spotless. They are your responsible child. What if you came home
one day and found their room a mess and their teacher called and said they
hadn’t been in class that day? You’d start asking questions immediately.
Why
not do that with your characters? Find their motive for every action in a
scene. When a character’s motives make sense to you, it will build a bond of
trust with your readers.
Lynette here:
I love this!! Sometimes when I’m writing and I can’t figure out how my
characters would respond to a certain situation, I realize it’s because I don’t
know that particular character well enough. I don’t know the motivation or the
goals. Now understand, I have my own style of getting to know my characters – I
use a character sketch. I have an excel document where I list all of my
characters across the top of the page then down below, put pertinent
information about those characters. When I learn something new about a
character, I add that to the description. And when I add a new character in the
story, I simply add that character to the chart. It’s a great way to keep up
with characters and keep their physical traits straight because I’m notorious
for saying a character has green eyes then by the end of the book, they’re
blue. Just ask my editors…no don’t.
Ahem…moving
on…
What
is it you like about the characters you read about? What is one of the most
memorable characters in a book you’ve read, one that won’t leave you alone?
Thank
you SO MUCH, Kristen, for popping in and joining us today. I know others look
forward to taking your advice and putting it to good use.
If
you’re interested in learning more about Kristen and perhaps reading some of
her books (which I highly recommend!) you can find her at www.KristinBillerbeck.com, Twitter:KristinBeck or read more on her Blog: www.GirlyGirl@Typepad.com.
Thanks
for stopping by! I look forward to hearing your thoughts on characterization. Have
a fabulous Wednesday. TWEETABLES
Finding a character's motive can move your book from good to great - by @Kristenbeck via @LynetteEason (Click to Tweet)
#Writing Motive, great tips from bestselling author Kristen Billerbeck, @KristenBeck via @LynetteEason (Click to Tweet)
I have to know what makes them the way they are before I start to write, at least the foundation of it. I find that in the Lie the character believes about themselves. That's embedded by the time they are 5 years old (before they can reason it away) and colors their whole outlook and motivation. As they get older, other events compound that Lie, making it stronger. It adds depth to the character arc, too.
ReplyDeleteExcellent info. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteFYI: Her name is Kristin not Kristen, which makes a difference on Twitter. For a moment I felt weirdly popular. Sincerely, @kristenbeck :-)
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