Andrea Merrell is a good friend of mine and an AMAZING editor. I asked her to share some of the things that stand in the way of acceptance when a writing submits a manuscript.
She's been a guest here on The Write Conversation before, but now that she has a book out for writers I persuaded her to come back.
I predict that MURDER OF A MANUSCRIPT is going to become one of those must-haves for writers. It's published by Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas and now available on Amazon. Personally, I give it a 5-star rating!
TURNING REJECTION INTO ACCEPTANCE
by Andrea Merrell
No one likes to be rejected. Unfortunately, when you’re a
writer, it comes with the proverbial territory. The key is to keep perfecting
your craft—and keep submitting.
When I first started writing, I simply put what was in my
head (and my heart) on paper. I had no clue how to format my words and had
never heard of things like: hooks, POV, showing-not-telling, backstory, and
syntax. Therefore, my first submission met with immediate rejection. Ouch!
Second submission—same scenario. I simply wasn’t ready.
Was I tempted to give up? Absolutely. Fortunately, I was
blessed with some great advice—the best advice I’ve ever received as a writer: “Find
a critique group, attend writers’ conferences, and network, network, network.”
(Thank you, Vonda Skelton!)
The problem with most rejection letters is not what they
say, but what they don’t say. Instead of giving you constructive criticism and
suggestions for improving your work, most simply state: Sorry, your submission does not meet our requirements at this time.
So, what are those requirements? What does an
agent/editor/publisher really expect? Speaking as an editor and member of a
pub-board, these are some of the elements I look for when I review a
submission:
- Quality of the writing.
- The writer’s voice.
- Did the first sentence or paragraph hook me?
- Is the formatting correct?
- Is the first page filled with typos?
- Does the writer have a good grasp of grammar, punctuation, and spelling?
- Does the writer show or tell the story?
- How does the writer handle backstory?
- Is there a natural flow?
- Is the content preachy?
Whether just starting out on your writing
journey, or a seasoned author, make it your goal to master these points so your
submission will make it past someone’s inbox. Know the basics. Edit and
proofread your work (bio, query letter, synopsis, proposal, manuscript,
and—yes—even your e-mails).
Bottom line: make sure your words are as clean and
professional as possible before you send them into cyber space. You will be
glad you did.
Andrea Merrell is a freelance writer and editor living in
the beautiful upstate of South Carolina. She is Associate Editor for Christian Devotions
Ministries and Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas. Andrea has led workshops
at the Kentucky Christian Writers Conference (KCWC), Writers Advance Boot Camp,
and The CLASS Christian Writers Conference in New Mexico. Her work has been
published online and in numerous anthologies. Andrea’s next book, Praying for the Prodigal, will be
released by Lighthouse Publishing of the Carolinas in 2015. To learn more about
her, visit her website: www.andreamerrell.com.
TWEETABLES
I may tattoo that list on my arm, Andrea. After years in this game, I still make those mistakes. The difference is, I catch most of them now. But we're continually fighting our natural instincts, the ones that earned us those rejection letters in the first place. It's a never ending learning process for sure. Thanks for the post!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ron. It's true ... we have to continually work hard and remind ourselves of all those things that can cause a manuscript to be rejected.
DeleteGood article. Thanks Andrea and Edie. I shared on twitter, too.
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Thank you so much, Rose!
DeleteAndrea did one of my first critiques at a writers conference. She was so nice and treated my work gently but thoroughly. I.admire her and value her opinion.
ReplyDeleteCathy, thank you for your kind and generous words. Working with you was a pleasure!
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