As a discovery writer, I sometimes feel as though I'm just a passenger on this train. I'm the transcriber of events observed. Or a screenwriter giving words to the movie playing in my head. Often, my characters will rebel, refuse, and rearrange the scenes I'm trying to create.
I don't know about your writing, but getting deeper into the story has caused some drama, and I don't just mean on the pages. NOLA has been started, restarted, edited, revamped, revised and solidified. And through the past three years of all that activity, it was getting hard to follow.
New Orleans happenings occur every day, and Josie is experiencing as much as she can. Characters, locations, food [oh! the food!], and of course drama, drama, drama.
Using index cards has been helpful, but I need something more. Certain events are set in stone, others are more fluid. NOLA takes place during October, and Halloween is a big occasion in the Big Easy. And let's be real: There's no bulletin board big enough to pin over a hundred index cards to that could fit on my. [Also, have y'all tried carrying a wall-size board in your backpack? Just sayin'.]
Calendaring NOLA helps me note the big events, emotions, and experiences that propel the story forward. This is where my month-at-a-glance planner page comes into play. I laid out the story from Josie's runaway red-eye, to the Crescent City Blues & BBQ Festival, to her first sip at Cafe du Monde, meeting new friends, reclaiming old habits, and more. There's a lot to remember about this journey. NOLA is timeless. That is, events don't happen on specific dates. So whether October 3rd is a Monday or a Thursday is insignificant. A few dot/stickers to cover the dates, and I have a full month's layout.
- The side notes allow me to list characters, locations, foods (for the NOLA Companion Cookbook), and other items I need to know.
- Face/emoticon stickers let me track emotions: Is a particular moment happy, sad, or exciting?
- Different colored pens highlight themes: locations, events, dramatic scenes.
- What's for dinner? Stickers indicate new eating experiences. Coffee stickers? Please. Do I really need to explain these? [whisper: Cafe du Monde.]
- Calendaring keeps it real: Does my story flow, drag, or skip around? [Note to self: Using a pencil helps until you know for sure. #experienceshows.]
Storyboarding NOLA is also a great at-a-glance review that gives forward movement by quickly answering questions:When was a character introduced?
- When was the last time it rained in New Orleans?
- What was the last big drama?
- Are too many events happening too closely together?
Of course, any calendaring system will do, but I find the month-at-a-glance layout really works for me.
Now it’s your turn: How do you keep track of your storyline?
With some sweet tea and responsible scrapbooking,
Molly Jo is a writer, editor, social media ninja, and producer of the weekly Firsts in Fiction podcast. She has been featured in children’s magazines, on blogs and devotional websites, and her short stories have earned her awards and scholarships from nationally acclaimed writing programs. She is the founder of New Inklings Press and author of The Unemployment Cookbook: Ideas for Feeding Families One Meal at a Time, and other books available through her website and on Amazon.
Her current work in progress, NOLA, is a location mystery set in New Orleans and is scheduled for publication in late 2016.